I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora kōrua Thank you for sharing your character evaluations from The Jungle Book. I think it was lovely that Father Wolf adopted Mowgli. Next time it would be awesome if you could add quotes from the book to support your ratings.
Hey Cairo, This is Mahana your classmate from school i like your ratings of the characters and nice work but i can't really see any other characters but it's okay well done.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora kōrua
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your character evaluations from The Jungle Book. I think it was lovely that Father Wolf adopted Mowgli. Next time it would be awesome if you could add quotes from the book to support your ratings.
Hey Cairo, This is Mahana your classmate from school i like your ratings of the characters and nice work but i can't really see any other characters but it's okay well done.
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