I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka rawe, great work on your descriptive writing Cairo! I really like how you used similes to help to create a tense mood. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?
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Ka rawe, great work on your descriptive writing Cairo! I really like how you used similes to help to create a tense mood. I wonder what other adjectives you could add?
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