I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Cairo, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. You have chosen some great pieces of personal information to share. Maybe next time you post, you could include a sentence to tell your readers what you've been learning about.
Hi we are Kasa and Ben and we are looking at this blog and you are right if you don't wash your hands you will have germs and gross hygiene that's why you should always wash your hands.
Kia ora Cairo, My anme is Sione from EHS, I like how you telling people to be hygiene, to keep them really clean, And I hope you read my comment.Ka kite.Have a really good holiday.I hope you be hygiene.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Cairo, thanks for sharing your visual blog profile. You have chosen some great pieces of personal information to share. Maybe next time you post, you could include a sentence to tell your readers what you've been learning about.
ReplyDeleteHi we are Kasa and Ben and we are looking at this blog and you are right if you don't wash your hands you will have germs and gross hygiene that's why you should always wash your hands.
ReplyDeletehi Cairo my name is Patrick i like how you a telling people to keep there hands clean keep up the good work
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DeleteKia ora Cairo, My anme is Sione from EHS, I like how you telling people to be hygiene, to keep them really clean, And I hope you read my comment.Ka kite.Have a really good holiday.I hope you be hygiene.
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