I am a Year 5 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Mīharo, amazing work Cairo! Your narrative had a good hook plus all of the elements it needed - characters, a setting, a problem and an outcome. Next time it would be great if you could add to your blog post to explain what the work is that you are sharing. I really enjoyed your voice expression in your podcast. Well done!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Mīharo, amazing work Cairo! Your narrative had a good hook plus all of the elements it needed - characters, a setting, a problem and an outcome. Next time it would be great if you could add to your blog post to explain what the work is that you are sharing. I really enjoyed your voice expression in your podcast. Well done!
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